Playful Writing
Building stories together to inspire
young writers: a teacher handbook
David Whitebread and Marisol Basilio
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Introduction
Let’s think about what writing a story demands. The
young writer needs to plan the process, perhaps develop
an outline of the text beforehand, and continuously
monitor his or her progress by revising the text while
writing. When we look at writing this way, it is easier
to understand how this is a dicult skill for children to
master. Indeed, children who struggle with turning ideas
into sentences can feel alienated from the learning
process and develop negative attitudes towards their
own abilities to write. In such cases, fostering motivation
is crucial and approaching writing playfully could be the
answer to keeping children engaged.
Research nds that providing a playful context where
children can freely re-enact and develop a known
story results in signicantly better-structured and
more creative stories using the same characters, than
a context where children follow adult-led activities
(Whitebread & Jameson, 2010).
This handbook is a product of the Play Learning
and Narrative Skills (PLaNS) project, which aimed
to develop a playful learning approach to improve
5-10 year olds’ narrative and writing skills, as well
as to investigate the potential impact of this playful
approach on childrens learning. This is known
as a ‘proof-of-concept’ study, in which a new
methodology is designed, implemented, and tested
on a small-scale. The PLaNS project came together
as a collaborative eort between the Faculty of
Education and three Primary Schools in Cambridge,
UK, from March 2013 to June 2015. The project was
supported by the LEGO Foundation.
Introduction
The approach used in the PLaNS project gives children
control over their learning process in a manner that is
fun, hands-on and engaging, while giving the necessary
instructional support through the design of activities
and explicit learning objectives. Based on research
on children’s writing and development, the teachers
designed and implemented pretence and construction
play activities that supported the writing, storytelling,
creativity and collaboration skills of primary students
in Year 1, 3 and 5. Over the course of a full academic
year, the teachers tried out new activities in their
classrooms and met regularly with the research team.
The purpose of this handbook is to share the playful
pedagogy that emerged from the PLaNS project: an
approach based on previous scientic evidence as well
as tried out in real classrooms.
In this handbook, you will nd key elements of the
PLaNS ethos, underpinning research and resources
that you can use to try this approach in practice. We
hope that these ideas may serve as inspiration for
unleashing teachers’ creativity and develop further
playful learning activities to support children’s writing.
You can see the teachers and children in action, and
meet the researchers, in the PLaNS project video by
copying this weblink into your browser:
https://vimeo.com/142506730
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Children have more ideas to write
“I think, because they had a short task at the
beginning which was playful – building with LEGO
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they then were a lot more on track with the writing
because they had a time to give their brain a break…
So when it actually came to the writing after, they
were a lot more engaged, a lot more motivated.”
(Year 1 teacher)
Actually (those children that you know are weaker
in the writing skills) had the most brilliant ideas and
seeing the self-esteem and the kudos that they get
from other people around them, is worth so much…”
(Year 3 teacher)
Children have better social skills
“I think it supported their collaborative skills. I
mean the ones whose personalities might not lend
themselves to collaborative work, they have worked
brilliantly, including some of the SEN children. It has
helped them with their social skills, and their turn
taking and their risk taking”.
(Year 3 teacher)
When looking back on the introduction of playful writing
activities in their classrooms, the participating teachers
saw a number of changes among children:
Children are more focused and engaged
“When they’re working or writing and they haven’t
got the model, they tend to talk about completely
random things that aren’t really related. But when
they were doing the LEGO modelling, talk was much
more relevant because it was all about the story,
rather than what they did at the weekend.”
(Year 1 Teacher)
“(The playful approach) took away some of the
stuness or the fear factor of having to write a
longer piece of writing, that they have to do every
week…I think it showed them that actually it can be
quite enjoyable.”
(Year 3 teacher)
“The enthusiasm they have to write, was massive
when anything to do with the LEGO. (...) That
frequent high level of motivation towards writing
just created a more positive feeling around the idea
of writing. So that children were then happier to
write.”
(Year 5 teacher)
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Table of contents
Supporting writing skills through guided play • 6
The PLaNS approach: using research in practice • 8
PLaNS lesson planning • 10
Background on the PLaNS project • 14
References • 16
Inspiration and resources • 18
Credits • 46
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Supporting writing skills through guided play
Let us unpack what children do when writing
The young writer needs to master the conventions for
writing a particular type of text (e.g. a letter is dierent
from a story), and needs to keep information in mind
such as the target audience, and an appropriate tone.
He or she needs to plan the process, perhaps develop
an outline of the text beforehand, and continuously
monitor his or her progress by revising the text.
Of course, the young writer needs to remember
and retrieve the content of the writing piece and
continuously think up new ideas. Then comes the
process of converting those ideas into words and then
transcribe the words onto paper or a screen, drawing
on his or her knowledge about how to form letters
and how to spell. Finally, the writer must evaluate the
written work against expectations and edit it, making
appropriate changes and corrections.
Retrieving and keeping information in mind, planning,
evaluating and revising a text draws on children’s
metacognitive skills, or the ability to control and
develop knowledge about one’s own thinking. If we
think of producing a written text as a problem-solving
task, rather than simply putting words on a page, then
children need to apply and hone their metacognitive
abilities in order to master writing (Hacker, Keener, &
Kircher, 2009).
Next are transcription or handwriting skills. These are
particularly important for young writers. If these skills
are not fully automatized, a lot of the child’s attention
is absorbed in physically writing a text. This leaves little
mental room for other key processes noted above,
such as planning and revising (Graham & Harris, 2000).
Supporting writing skills
through guided play
Research on children’s development as writers has helped us to understand what
cognitive skills are involved in the process of writing texts and stories. Although
dierent models and angles exist, all researchers agree at least in one aspect:
writing is much more than putting letters on a page – it is a complex process
where we orchestrate multiple skills and draw on previous knowledge.
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Supporting writing skills through guided play
What support can help children to become
procient writers?
In the PLaNS project, children engaged in pretence and
construction play through collaborative activities using
creative materials. These literacy activities often had
two phases: a planning or idea phase where children
represented their ideas in a 3D format, and then moved
on to a related writing task. During the collaborative
building phase, children came up with ideas, structured
their stories, and rehearsed expressing ideas in
language. During the writing task, the physical model
helped children remember what happened in their story
or what they planned to write about.
Another important issue is motivation to practice
writing. Struggling writers might have diculties
with one or more specic skills involved in writing,
and become convinced that they are ‘not good
writers’. As they move through primary school, the
writing demands increase. If these children have not
practiced enough to overcome their diculties, writing
becomes an overwhelming task and they feel alienated
from the process. This might explain why struggling
writers fail to catch up with their peers. In the PLaNS
project, having the opportunity to practice writing
in a playful non-threatening context seemed to
improve children’s attitudes towards writing and their
motivation to practice.
What the children said about using creative, hands-
on materials and playful activities to help them write:
“It helps us do more writing.” (child one). “And it
makes me more crazy.” (child two). “And it makes me
have more ideas.” (child three).
“…[children] can put down their ideas and then, if
they forget, if they think, oh no I forgot my idea,
they can just look then at the LEGO and maybe
remember it”
“I enjoy LEGO because it is almost like playing in
class, but we’re using it for a learning reason. So it’s
fun to do it, when you know that it’s gonna help you
with something as well.“
“Because if, if they don’t have any imagination, with
LEGO you can use the imagination, so they learn to
use their imagination. And also they can learn to build
and work together.”
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The PLaNS approach
The PLaNS approach:
using research in practice
In the PLaNS project, we talk about ‘guided play’ rather than ‘free play’,
because all the activities intend to improve children’s learning and
their ability to write, as well as their collaborative skills. Although the
activities are proposed by adults, they remain child-led and playful.
The activities can be characterised as follows:
Hands-on experiences with creative elements (any materials that are easy to
construct and be creative with, for example LEGO
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bricks).
Children have a high degree of choice within the activities (deciding what to
build, the content of the writing, how to manage the task within the group and
where to work, including the oor or carpet area etc.).
Activities require children to be imaginative and creative, not just in building a
model, but also when writing and their creative ideas are valued and shared.
Children express their ideas through dierent mediums (talking, building,
writing, pictures, videos, drawing etc.) and translate their ideas from one
medium to another.
Children have opportunities to show and share their creations, giving
purpose to the creative process.
Connecting building and writing
A key point of successful activities is to connect the
two aspects – the building and the writing – to the
children. For example, introducing the writing activity
before they start building, model the writing in front
of the class using their creative model as a prompt,
or remind children to think about the content of their
writing while they build. You can nd more ideas for
linking building and writing in the resource section.
Enhancing dialogue and collaboration
In the PLaNS project, children participated in groups
of three and worked in these same groups throughout
the academic year to plan, represent and inspire their
writing. Discussing their ideas with classmates, and
having to agree on their collaborative creations, means
children engage in exploratory talk (a constructive and
reasoned form of dialogue) which in turn is reected in
the organisation and overall quality of their writing.
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Negotiating in groups
Teachers in the project introduced, reminded, and
supported the use of ‘Rules for Talk’, a form of contract
agreed by the children on how to interact with each
other in group work activities, in order to promote the
development of dialogic skills for learning together.
Successful activities had elements that children
needed to discuss and decide as a group, time and
support to do this well, and reection about the
process. The resource section has specic ideas and
materials to help prepare for playful writing activities.
Promoting reection and problem-solving
Given that children had the freedom to decide what
to do and how to do it, they practiced reection and
problem-solving (metacognitive monitoring and
control) as they discussed, planned and negotiated in
groups. Successful activities include questions that
prompt and support children to reect, and gain skills
and knowledge about their learning processes. For
example, requiring them to explain the model to others
or ask questions about other’s models. The lesson
planning section gives step-by-step examples.
Integration with the curriculum
All the activities were fully integrated with the
curriculum, both in and beyond literacy. Each activity
built on children’s previous knowledge and served as
a scaold for further learning opportunities. Teachers
supported children’s awareness by making connections
between subjects explicit and helping them see how
learning objectives built on previous work.
...when we get, just get
to choose our own thing,
then we can just use our
imagination and do it.
(Year 1 student).
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PLaNS lesson planning
In guided play lessons, as in any other lesson, the teacher provides clear learning
objectives, dierentiated by ability, and these are shared with students. However,
the overarching ethos of the approach is to promote childrens ability to learn
autonomously and, therefore, create a learning environment in which children enjoy
and reect upon the process. This is the most important goal to keep in mind. Every
aspect of planning should have this goal as a priority.
PLaNS lesson planning
What aspect of writing are children learning about?
Establish a genre and writing goals (e.g. persuasive
writing, newspaper article, graphic novels, etc;
opening and connecting clauses, punctuation).
What are children writing about?
Establish a topic, book, book section, or shared
experience, such as a school trip.
How do the learning objectives and topic connect
with previous learning and future goals?
Identify previous knowledge and experiences and
the ways in which the current activity helps to build
the basis for future learning.
What is the building task?
Dene a clear building task for children according
to the objectives (for example, if children are
learning about the narrative structure of fairy
tales, a building activity that includes representing
dierent scenes would be suitable; whereas if
the objective is to produce a newspaper article,
a single scene representing the main event to be
reported might be better).
What is the writing task?
Dene a writing task according to the learning
objectives and which allows for dierentiation.
What is the purpose and format of the task?
If children see a meaningful purpose in the task,
this can have an impact on their motivation to
write. Identify a specic presentation format
(storyboard, writing own illustrated book, a comic
strip, a printed newspaper, etc.) and the audience
and purpose of the writing activity. Examples could
be display in school, write a letter to your favourite
author, give tips to younger students, create an
animated lm for a contest or edit a newspaper to
share with families.
How will the activity be structured?
Decide if you will need more than one lesson to
conduct the activity, or if you will split the activity
in several sections. Remember that one building
activity can serve to inspire several pieces of
writing!
Here are a list of questions to inspire your planning of guided play activities.
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PLaNS lesson planning
Every lesson using a guided play approach is dierent,
as there are many ways to use creative, 3D materials
in collaborative groups to support writing. Even if
teachers use the same lesson plan, children respond
creatively and contribute to enhance the learning
experience in their own ways.
The teacher’s role in guided play
The teacher’s role in guided play is to propose a
learning framework (in preparation and introduction
stages), observe and ask questions, and be supportive
of children’s eorts (in building, sharing and connecting
building to writing stages), while being open to their
decisions and ideas about how to undertake the tasks.
The teacher also plays an important role as an observer
in the classroom, identifying interesting or challenging
situations, highlighting good practices, and learning
opportunities to share with the class as a whole.
Finally, while children undertake the writing task/s
(playful writing stage) the teacher’s role is similar to
practice as usual, providing specic writing instruction,
and giving feedback for childrens individual work.
Crucially, their role at this stage is also to support
a relaxed and focused writing environment. They
encourage children to help each other (while
respecting other’s work), to speak aloud but quietly
among themselves in order to generate ideas or revise
their work, and to go back to change the model to help
them with editing ideas, changing perspectives or
being inspired to continue writing.
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3. Sharing ideas (whole class and groups)
Give children the opportunity to share ideas with
other groups, and to individually explain the ideas
represented in their models.
Ask questions about how children collaborated.
Prompt children to discuss examples of when they
used the Rules for Talk.
4. Transition from building to writing (whole class)
Prompt children to practice how to generate ideas
from their models and construct sentences. Some
teachers used video recordings of the children
building at this stage, so that children could listen
to their recordings before writing.
Explain and model how to increase the complexity
of sentences.
5. Playful writing (individual work in mixed ability
groups)
Remind children of the writing task and the
specic learning goals.
Encourage children to help each other, and remind
them to be respectful of each other’s work.
Encourage children to go back to the model if they
‘get stuck’ when generating ideas for their writing.
Remind children of specic strategies (e.g. to
circle words if unsure of spelling, or to look around
at the classroom displays to nd good adjectives
to use, and ideas for opening clauses, etc.)
Encourage children to revise their work and
evaluate if they have fullled the learning
objectives.
Provide children with the opportunity to reflect
on their progress as writers, their strengths
and weaknesses.
The steps listed below oer inspiration for how
to introduce a new activity to the whole class, get
children started building in groups and sharing their
ideas, how to transition to writing and how to support
them as they write.
1. Whole class introduction
Present or remind children of the topic, book or
shared experience. Encourage children to share
their ideas with the class.
Remind children of the Rules for Talk and LEGO
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rules. You can ask children to anticipate potential
problems when working together and discuss
good strategies to solve them. Children might
have the rules printed and available on their tables
or displayed in the classroom.
Explain the building and the writing task to the
children. Encourage them to give examples of
ideas they might include in their models and
writing.
Describe additional activities that children might
carry out while building that will help them with
their writing. For example, to make a note of good
character names or adjectives.
2. Building time in mixed ability groups
Prompt children to have a discussion about ideas
to represent before they commit to building.
Allow children to organise their own time. Be
available for questions or for children to ‘show o
their creations to you.
Remind children of the time halfway through the
building and towards the end.
Walk around the classroom to see dierent ways
in which children are building ideas. Ask some
children to share with the class ideas to highlight
their creativity.
Remind children of the need to discuss and agree
on a single group model.
For documenting models, take pictures or ask
children to take them by themselves.
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Teachers in the PLaNS project agreed that these
were a good summary of typical steps in their lessons
but as they were also very creative in their practice,
not every lesson followed this pattern. For example,
when children in Year 5 created comic strips, they had
a brainstorm and drawing-planning activity before
they built models to photograph for their illustrations.
Then they edited their ideas using the models and
proceeded to writing up speech balloons and captions.
In another example, children in Year 3 constructed
models to re-enact scenes in order to spot transition
errors in their scripts and x them by re-writing,
learning the importance of revising and editing through
pretence play.
“We look at the model
sometimes and then we think of
stu and then we write it down
on a piece of paper.”
(Year 1 student).
In short, this is what a playful writing activity is about,
according to a ve-year-old student and writer:
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Background on the PLaNS project
In previous research at the Faculty of Education, we
showed that playful experiences can be more eective
than directive teaching in supporting Year 1 children’s
writing skills (Whitebread & Jameson, 2010). Providing
a playful context where children could freely re-enact
and develop a known story resulted in signicantly
better structured and more creative oral and written
stories using the same characters than a context in
which children followed adult-led activities. However,
there is currently not enough evidence to support
the implementation of playful pedagogies in primary
education practice across the board, and there is
increasing pressure on schools to demonstrate their
eectiveness in standardised assessments, fostering
result-oriented practices. These pressures constrain
the use of playful approaches, which are process-
oriented in nature and place the emphasis on children’s
engagement and enjoyment of the learning process
rather than on short-term learning outcomes.
In the PLaNS project, we wanted to extend the idea
that a playful context can support children’s narratives
in the classroom. So, we set out to use instructional
principles, established in previous research, to
incorporate playful activities into practice. Children
in nine classes (three Year 1, three Year 3, and three
Year 5) worked together in small groups during literacy
lessons to create and represent stories and ideas by
building LEGO
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models that then inspired writing in
various ways, such as comic strips, movie scripts, 3D
storyboards, and much more.
Background on the
PLaNS project
Throughout a whole academic year, collaborative
LEGO building was the main form of planning their
writing tasks. All groups consisted of three children
of mixed ability in their writing, and throughout the
year, teachers encouraged not only their motivation
to write, but also their metacognitive strategies, and
collaboration skills through dialogic learning.
Children dedicated a good amount of time (at least
four lessons each term) engaged in collaborative tasks
in which they had to plan and manage the creation of
3D models that represented the ideas they wanted
to put into writing. They also received the specic
instruction they normally would to learn about formal
aspects of writing (such as, conventions of dierent
genres, structure, punctuation, spelling, etc.).
However, when they received this information, the
children had already generated ideas for their writing
in a playful way; they had embarked on the process of
translating ideas represented in their models into a
written text.
Through practical activities developed by teachers
and regular meetings with them throughout the
academic year, we documented the experience and
gathered invaluable information about what works in
the classroom. But we also wanted to nd out if this
approach would, in principle, have a benecial impact
for participating children.
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The PLaNS research team evaluated 108 of the
children that participated in the project at the
beginning and end of the school year to measure the
impact of this teaching approach in childrens writing,
as well as a range of skills necessary to become a
procient writer: oral narrative skills, vocabulary,
metacognition, and creativity. Children and teachers
were observed in the classroom throughout the
academic year as they implemented this playful
pedagogy, and were also interviewed by the research
team in order to understand their perspectives on
teaching and learning writing skills in a collaborative
and playful way.
Our initial ndings are very promising for a small-
scale intervention. First, we were able to assess the
progress of childrens writing skills and compare them
with children who were taught the previous academic
year by the same teachers but who did not receive
the intervention. We found that children in the PLaNS
project improved in the formal aspects of writing
skills (measured by schools according to National
Curriculum Levels) just as much as their peers in the
previous year. We also compared childrens progress
at the beginning and the end of the year, and found
signicant improvement in children’s quality of writing,
as well as key skills related to ability to write, such
as creativity and metacognition. We also observed
that children were highly engaged in the activities
throughout the year and learnt to collaborate better
with others. Moreover, children who were more playful
and creative (engaging in pretence play, social play, and
contributing with original ideas) were also those that
worked better in their mixed ability groups.
In the PLaNS project, children
improved signicantly in the
quality of their writing, as well
as key skills related to their
ability to write, such as creativity
and metacognition. Moreover,
children who were more playful
and creative also worked better
in groups.
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Before starting playful writing activities • 20
Linking building and writing • 26
Example of PLaNS lesson in Year 1 • 28
Example of PLaNS lesson in Year 3 • 32
Example of PLaNS lesson in Year 5 • 36
Ideas for playful writing • 40
Inspiration and resources
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Before starting playful writing activities
Tips for establishing LEGO rules and rules for talk
Encourage children to think about possible LEGO
rules and rules for talk in small groups
Encourage each group to come up with their
priority of rules
Encourage the whole class to identify the most
important LEGO rules and rules for talk (4 or 5
rules to start with)
Display LEGO rules and rules for talk on the wall
Display sheets or cards with LEGO rules and rules
for talk in front of children on their table to remind
them about good group work
Use pictures to support children to read the rules
Give children ownership so that they can use the
rules when they have conicts
Before starting playful
writing activities
Ideas for LEGO rules
When working with LEGO, keep all LEGO pieces in
the working area (e.g. an A3 sheet of paper of large
hoop)
When any LEGO piece falls on the oor, pick it up
Dis-assemble LEGO pieces before packing them up
Be responsible and look after your LEGO set
Do not put LEGO pieces into your pocket
Do not lick LEGO pieces
Before starting the various playful writing activities, children need to agree and get
familiar with a set of ground rules for talk and using LEGO
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in collaborative activities.
Here are some tips and ideas for establishing LEGO rules and rules for talk. The ideas
in this section were provided by teachers and children from the PLaNS project, with
resources in turn drawing on a previous .research project called ‘ChAT - see the
Credits on pages 46-47 in this handbook.
Setting the rules for talk
Before agreeing with your class on a set of ground rules
for talk, children will need time to become familiar with
key vocabulary, experience talk, and reect upon the
quality of their dialogue.
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An example of a progression of activities leading to
the development of rules for talk
Week 1: Focus on talk
Activity: What did you do at play? (a) Talk to the
person next to you (b) Find another person to tell.
Illustrate successful/unsuccessful talk using
stories. Introduce key vocabulary: compromise,
agree, interrupt, ignore.
Reect on the quality of talk.
Week 2: Focus on listening
Illustrate not listening using a puppet: “What is
going wrong?” “Why?” Draw on vocabulary.
Pair Activity: Sit children back to back. Ask one of
the children to describe an object and the second
child to guess it. Discuss how well it worked and
what was important.
Week 3: Focus on reaching agreement
Use debates or other group activities that
encourage children to seek agreement (E.g.
sort, rank).
Activities that facilitate the incorporation of key/
new vocabulary
1. Encourage children to report on what other children
have said.
2. Encourage children to provide reasons, such as
discuss why someone in the class might be a good
friend.
3. Encourage children to agree when making group
decisions. For example, decide what materials to use in
a joint arts project.
4. Introduce a TALK BOX (see page 25) as part of the
classroom materials and select a dierent key word
each week.
5. Model the use of key/new talk vocabulary in
dierent lessons.
Activities that encourage children to reect on the
quality of their talk
1. Encourage children to evaluate the quality of
their talk:
Did you nd it easy or dicult to talk in your
groups? Why?
Who was a good talker/listener? Why?
Did everybody in the group have the chance to talk?
2. Ask ‘how’ questions:
How can you tell if someone is listening to you?
How did you come to an agreement?
How did you solve your disagreement?
How did the talk help in your group?
3. Encourage them to think about possible rules for talk:
What rule would be helpful if…?
Before starting playful writing activities
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Why
Because
I think... I agree...
Resources to support these activities
Talk Cards
Talk cards can be helpful when encouraging the use of
new vocabulary during group activities. Children can be
encouraged to use one (I think…) or more cards (I agree
because…) during group activities
.
For younger children:
Use a puppet and pretence play to model good use of
talk as well as potential problems. Encourage children
to describe what happened and how the dialogue could
be improved.
For older children:
Use action gures (such as LEGO minigures, or
gures made by children), to enact how good and bad
group work looks. Children can also enact a problem
that they anticipate during group work, and ask the
whole class which strategies might be helpful to
address them.
Talk Display and ‘Group Contracts’
The Talk Display will allow you to highlight new
vocabulary, remind children of talk rules and also to
record children’s appropriate talk behaviours. Having
group contracts in which children have committed to
work with rules.
Pictures of ‘Talk Behaviours’
The goal of this activity is to establish a set of ground
rules for talk in the classroom. Children work in
small groups (3 or 4 children), and are given a set
of statements concerning talk behaviours (see the
picture resources on the following pages). Ask them
to jointly agree on which behaviours are helpful and
which are not helpful to encourage dialogue. Also,
give children the chance to identify those behaviours
they are not sure about. After the small group work,
the whole class is encouraged to identify the most
important behaviours that should constitute the class
rules (4-5 rules to start with).
Examples of success criteria for the group work
Listen to each other’s’ ideas.
Explain your ideas to everybody in the group.
Group the cards into those that are helpful (good
ideas) for talk, not so helpful (bad ideas), and those
that the group as a whole is not sure about.
For this activity to be successful children need:
To be familiar with the talk vocabulary.
To be familiar with the idea of explaining their
reasoning to others. Previous activities should
have encouraged children to use questions like:
“What do you think?” or “Why do you think that?”
and answers like: “I think that because…”
To be able to read the statements (with or without
the support of pictures). Reading abilities should
be taken into account when grouping the children.
You can copy the cards
on the following pages
for use in the activities.
Before starting playful writing activities
Listen
Take turns
Agree
Disagree
Reasons
Talk
Compromise
Interrupt
Ignore
Why do you think that?
I think…because…
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Linking building and writing
Tip 1: Attaching vocabulary to the LEGO model
Giving children new vocabulary that would be useful
and physically attaching the vocabulary to their LEGO
model can make a good link between their model and
the writing. Children may have understood the words
while not really applied them to their writing. When
seeing the vocabulary in front of them, children could
match the vocabulary with parts of their building, and
use the provided words to produce their writing.
Tip 2: Asking children to write down exciting words
When children are building their LEGO models, they
can be given a sheet of plain paper. If they come up with
any exciting words or adjectives or adverbs or phrases,
they can write them down and use these words or
phrases later when they are writing.
Linking building and writing
Tip 3: Modelling using the LEGO model to write
Several teachers mentioned modelling as an essential
step, that is, carefully showing children how you want
them to use their model to write. You could get one
of the models that the children have built and show
them how to look back at it and write. This would help
them understand how they could use their model as
the prompt to support their writing, rather than just
literally describing their LEGO model.
Tip 4: Asking children to explain their own models
After a group has nished building, you could ask
children to explain their models. After children working
on a table nish building, you could ask them to explain
what they have built to other groups, especially when
the model is abstract. This will get the children thinking
about how they are going to tell the story, write their
report, or whatever they are doing. Giving children
the opportunity to verbalise their ideas will help them
to construct a structure, sentences and specic
vocabulary that can be used in their writing.
Building with LEGO
®
bricks and creative tools is fun, but the transition
from building to writing may not always turn out to be easy for children.
Here we present some tips that the participating teachers found useful
in linking the building activity and writing.
The LEGO Foundation
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Tip 5: Looking back at their own models after
nishing writing
Once children have completed their writing, it could
be benecial to ask them to look back at their models
again, and to see how they have used their models
and whether they need to use them dierently.
Children can think about whether their writing plans,
or the ideas they have when building their models,
have been reected in their writing, and whether any
improvements can be made to their writing.
Tip 6: Taking photos of LEGO models and using them
to help writing
Keeping all the actual models that children have built
may not always be feasible. To remind children of their
creations, you could take photos of their models and
use these photos to help them write. Children can stick
these photos in their books and look at them when
they are doing their writing.
Tip 7: Giving children a clear goal
It can be helpful to give children a clear reason for
having fun. Having a clear goal in mind and knowing
what they are going to do after building their models
will be benecial to their writing.
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Example of PLaNS Lesson in Year 1
Example of PLaNS
Lesson in Year 1
The following is a lesson that took place with children aged 5. In the story ‘Room
on the Broom’, a witch and her cat y over forests, rivers and mountains on their
broomstick until a stormy wind blows away the witchs hat, bow and wand. They
are retrieved by a dog, a bird and a frog, and each animal asks for a ride on the
broom. They climb on, one after the next, until the broom is so heavy that it snaps
in two...
Illustration from page 22 of “Gems from Mother Goose”, McLoughlin Bros., Inc. (1899)
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Example of PLaNS Lesson in Year 1
Before building
Setting the context (reading the book “Room on
the Broom” together)
Explaining the task (retelling your favourite parts
of story in the right order)
The teacher read the book “the Room on the Broom”
to the children (they had heard the story before)
and discussed what happened in the story with the
children. She then took out a LEGO
®
set and explained
to the children what they were going to do.
Teacher:
So we’re going to pick some of the bits of the story
that we like the most. And we are going to try at the
end of this morning is to write the story. We need to
tell it in the right order, don’t we? So we need to think
in what order things are happening.
The teacher asked the children what happened rst,
second, and next in the story, and the children retold
the story in their own words. She then asked the
children to work as a team to choose 3 parts of the
story that they were going to make.
Teacher:
We need to think about dierent parts of the story.
We need something from the beginning, something
from the middle, and something from the end. You
need to talk to your LEGO buddies because you are
going to make your stories together.
Children looked at the book together and discussed
which scenes they wanted to make. They decided to
make a truly magnicent broom, a dragon, and a broom
snapping into two.
During building
Encouraging children to work as a team
Reminding children of their plans and what they
still need to make
Children started choosing LEGO pieces from the
boxes to build their models. At rst, two girls both
wanted to make the truly magnicent broom, and one
of them suggested that they could make it together.
They decided to use two bases to make a long broom
and there were lots of negotiations and compromises
going on while they built their models.
The next pages illustrate their discussions while
building and writing.
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Ann: Shall we make this for the truly magnicent
broom?
Emma: No. I’m doing the truly magnicent broom.
Ann: I thought you’re doing the one in the rst.
Emma: No. I’ll start it o.
Ann: Maybe I’ll just do that with you for now. Maybe we
can…Let’s use two boards for the broom because it’s a
really long broom.
(Ann joined with Emma and the two girls built together.)
Ann: This looks like a really comfortable seat (she put
the seat on the base)
Emma: No. That’s the wrong seat. We need the seat in
the front.
Ann: Oh yeah!
Emma: I have a good idea... (She chose a LEGO piece
from the box and showed it to Ann). That can be a bird.
Ann: I think the best bird is a bat.
Emma: Ok if you insist (She picked a piece of bat
from the box and put it on). A bat! (The two girls
laughed together)
Working together, the two girls built a seat, a dog, a
cat, a bird, a witch, and mountains and lights for the
truly magnicent broom of the story. After a while, the
boy Charlie made a shower for the frog and happily
showed his model to the two girls. However, Emma did
not seem happy and said she was planning to make the
shower. Ann apologised to Charlie for Emma and tried
to persuade Emma to include Charlie’s shower model
into their truly magnicent broom.
Charlie: (smiling and showing his model to the two
girls) Look! I did the shower for the frog on the broom!
Emma: (looking at the model and not seeming very
happy) But...but I’m doing the shower for the frog on
the broom!
Charlie and Emma both remained quiet for several
seconds. Then Ann whispered “sorry” to Charlie.
Ann: Yeah. But Harry hasn’t done anything for the truly
magnicent broom, Emma?
Emma: (to Ann) But then...you’ve done most of it.
Ann: (to Emma)But you can help me!
Emma: I’m just doing this bit. That’s all what I’m doing.
I don’t want any arguments in here! (to Charlie) But is it
OK if I copy that?
Charlie: Yeah.
Emma: Thanks.
Charlie: But there is not much of the same bits.
Emma: Oh...
Ann: Maybe you can use Charlie’s or it will be very
sad of him because he would be without the truly
magnicent broom.
After the three children built for about 20 minutes, the
teacher asked what they’ve made. She then moved the
nished truly magnicent broom model onto a display
board and asked the children to work on other models
that they still needed to build. The children then started
discussing how they could make a dragon model.
Charlie: (showing a LEGO piece to Emma) Look, this can
be the mouth.
Emma: (receiving the piece from Charlie and trying to
make it open and close) Em...OK. Look, (showing it to
Ann) it’s open, closed, open, closed.
Seeing that Emma is using his idea, Charlie smiled.
Emma: And it was my idea to go closed, open.
Charlie: It was both of our idea. And I can still make the
mouth with re.
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The children were then busying making their dragon
model. They made the dragon’s body, horn, eyes, and
wings. When the two girls had dierent opinions, one
reminded the other: “you need to listen to each other’s
ideas. We’re LEGO buddies”. When the boy wanted to
make his own dragon model, a girl reminded him:”we
are working as a team”.
After building the dragon model, the children also
made a model of the monster which was actually
made up of the cat, the dog, the frog, and the bird. The
children decided to use brown bricks to represent the
mud surrounding the animals. They also made a witch
lying on the oor to represent that she was fainting.
Transition from building to writing
Using posters to help sequence the models
Encouraging children to use their models to make
sentences before writing
The teacher put all models that children had nished
on a display board and took away all the unused pieces.
She then took out some yellow posters and asked the
children to use the posters to help them sequence
their story.
Teacher:
We’re using these to help us sequence the story,
because we’re going to retell the story. So looking
at the LEGO models will remind you of some of the
things that happened in the story. So what happened
rst in the story, who can make a sentence of what
happened the rst?
One girl made a sentence “once upon a time there was
a witch who had a cat”. She then wrote down number
1 on a yellow post-it and put it aside with the model
which represented the rst part of their story. The
children then took turns to retell what happened next
in the story, before writing down number 2, 3, or 4 on a
yellow post-it and putting each post-it aside with the
model which represented the second, third, and fourth
part of their story.
Teacher:
Now you’re trying to write the story in the right
order. You might want to use words like rst, second,
and next. Look at the LEGO model to help you
remember what happened if you forget…If you could
include some story book language like “whoosh!
They were gone”, that would be lovely.
The teacher wrote down “once upon a time there was
a witch” on the ipchart and asked the children to
continue their own stories.
The children were highly concentrated in their writing.
They sometimes stopped writing for a bit and read
what they had written before rubbing some words
and revising them. The teacher helped them with the
spelling of words occasionally. After 30 minutes, each
child wrote more than one page of the story.
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Example of PLaNS
Lesson in Year 3
This is a lesson example with 7-year-olds working with the story ‘The Enchanted Wood’:
When Joe, Beth and Frannie climb up to the top of the Faraway Tree, they meet Silky, Moon-
Face and the Saucepan Man. Their new friends show them an exciting secret – how to visit
lots of strange and magical lands and they have many thrilling and magical adventures.
The teacher introduced the lesson by asking questions
about the story that the children had read.
Teacher:
Last time we read a little bit of the book and the
children were up the tree and they found a magical
land, do you remember anything about roundabout
land? Do you remember what it looked like?
Children discussed what the characters in the book
found on the top of the tree, such as running rabbit,
mouse, trees, and music.
Teacher:
So the last line of that chapter was “I vote we don’t
ever come back to this tree”. But of course, they did
go up to the tree again. And every time they went
up to the tree, they found a dierent land. Some of
the lands were really nice lands, and some of the
lands were not so nice lands. So do you think the
roundabout land is a nice land or not?
Children discussed what they liked and not liked about
the roundabout land.
Teacher:
So today we’re going to be thinking about if we went
up to the faraway tree, what land might we nd? I’ve
got a whiteboard each, and I’d like you to jot down any
ideas. I might jot down some as well. We are eventually
going to be building something together, so we’ll have
to compromise on it. But let’s get some ideas rst.
They can be nice, or they can be not very nice.
Before building
Setting the context (discussing the story)
Explaining the task (creating your own faraway land)
Inspiring ideas and writing down children’s
decision
Reminding children of talk rules
Materials on the table: whiteboards, sheets, pens,
and pencils.
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Children and teacher wrote down their ideas on each
one’s whiteboard for about 2 minutes. Then teacher
asked each child to explain their ideas.
The ideas that children came up with included no-
vegetable land, dog land, chatterbox land, sh land,
noisy land (where everything talks), and animal land.
The ideas that the teacher came up with included ying
land, chocolate land, giant land, trampoline land, and
jelly land.
Teacher:
So lots of really good ideas. You’re going to come up
with your idea together, so you can combine dierent
ideas. Before you start, you need to think about your
talk rules. Can you remind me of your talk rules?
Children discussed their talk rules, such as “think about
big ideas”, “I’m not going to talk when someone else is
talking”, and “not shouting”.
The teacher asked the children to discuss which ideas
they are going to use as a group. She reminded them
of the importance of compromise when working as a
team.
After giving children 5 minutes to discuss, the teacher
asked them to decide their ideas and wrote down their
decision on a ipchart.
The children decided that they will have Zombie Land
with armies of sh in the south, Gummy Bear Land in
the north, Human Land in the middle, Giant land in the
west, Gravity and Trampoline Land in the east.
During building
Encouraging children to plan before building
Asking children to explain their models
Reminding children of the time
Teacher took out LEGO
®
bricks and encouraged the
children to decide what they were going to make each
and to think how they were going to build them.
A girl and a boy decided to make Zombie Land together
rst, another girl decided to make Gummy Bear Land
rst. They decided that they would put all the lands
together afterwards. They also came up with building
ideas such as using tall gures to represent the giant
and making a square to represent the trampoline land.
Children were given 40 minutes to build and were
all highly engaged in the activity. They talked about
building ideas (e.g. using blue cylinders to represent
the eyes of the giant and yellow blocks to represent
its head), negotiated about special LEGO pieces, and
pretended talking as zombie and sh.
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Ellie and Charlie were building a Zombie model
together while Jane was building a gummy bear land.
Ellie: (to Charlie) Come on then, we can do this.
Charlie: (Singing) Babababa...How are we going to do
the head?
Ellie: Just do a circle. (She added a brick on top of the
model)
Charlie and Jane both laughed.
Charlie: That hat? Basically that hat?
Ellie: Yeah, just make it a bit taller.
Charlie: OK.(He helped added more bricks onto the
model)
Ellie: Keep on building. (Ellie and Charlie continued
working on the model)
Charlie: (excited) I know what the head can be. I’ve got
a great idea. I found something (he found a cylinder
LEGO piece out of a box and showed it to Ellie). This
could be a head.
Ellie: Let me check it.
Charlie: Or they can be the eyes. I’ve got two.
Ellie: I think they should be their ears. Maybe they can
be their shoulder parts like that.
Charlie: No, no, no, because we need four of them,
you know.
Ellie: Yes I know. So pass me another one.
Teacher reminded the children when they had 10 and
5 minutes building time left, and encouraged them to
think about what they still needed to build.
When the building time nished, the children had made
a Zombie Land model, a Fish land model, a Giant Land
model, and other models such as tractors and bikes.
The teacher then asked the children to pack up unused
LEGO pieces into boxes.
Transition from building to writing
Giving each child a chance to talk about their models
Encouraging children to think about how to make
good sentences
Asking children to jot down their ideas and
writing plans
After children packed up the unused pieces, the
teacher asked them to explain what they had built.
Jean (pointing to her model): This is sh land and
they’ve got some doors. And they’re neighbours. And if
you want to leave there, you just jump out the door and
to the Gummy Land.
Ellie: And this is Zombie and Gratify Land. And this is our
tractor! This is the child seat for the sh, the army sh
(Moving the tractor model through the doors). And this
is the way they come out to ght, and they come in.
Charlie: No. They come in the other way.
Jane: I think you should put the door the other
way around.
Ellie: Oh. So they come out and come in.
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Teacher:
Now what I’d like you to think about is to imagine
that you were the children going up to the top of the
faraway tree and come out to this land. So you’re
going to do quite a lot of detailed description, we
want it to be a really fantastic piece of writing. So
what sorts of things do we need to include?
Children came up with ideas such as full stops, capital
letters, commas, fronted adverbials, adverbs, powerful
verbs, and adjectives. The teacher then wrote these
down on the ipchart so that children could see when
they wrote.
Teacher:
So if you come out to the land, what’s the important
type of information that you’re going to include,
what they can hear, what they can smell, and what
they can see? You can also say what they are feeling
inside.
The children discussed what information they would like
to include and spoke out descriptive sentences, such as
“slowly and cautiously Joe steps onto the land”.
Teacher:
Great! Lots of details! Now I’ll give you 2 minutes
to jot down any ideas you have that you’re going to
include in your writing.
Children started jotting down their ideas for writing
on their own whiteboard. Teacher then asked them to
start writing and reminded them that they could look
at the model, use it to help them describe, and imagine
that they were there.
The children started writing. They occasionally talked
about words that they are going to use in their writing
and discussed how their story would develop. They
also used their models to act out what happened next
for a bit and then came back with their writing.
The teacher reminded children of the time when
they’ve got 15, 5 and 2 minutes left to write. When
children nished writing, the teacher asked them to
read through their writing, check the punctuation, and
see if there is anything that they could do to improve it.
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Example of PLaNS Lesson
in Year 5
In this example, children aged 9 wrote their own Greek myth. The picture below
shows some of the cards used in this lesson. On one side of the cards are pictures
of the Greek myth characters (e.g. Perseus, Hercules, Cassandra), gods, goddesses
(e.g. Athena), monsters (e.g. Typhon), or weapons (e.g. sword). On the other side of
the cards are more detailed descriptions of the characters, gods, or weapons.
Before building
Setting the context (Greek myth)
Explaining the task (creating your own Greek
myth story)
Inspiring ideas of building and planning
Materials on the table: a box of LEGO
®
bricks, a pile of
Greek myth cards, activity sheets, pens and pencils.
The teacher took out a pile of Greek myth cards and
asked the children to sort them into heroes, gods,
monsters, rewards and treasures. Children discussed
Greek gods and creatures with the teacher while
categorising the cards.
Example of PLaNS Lesson in Year 5
Teacher:
Now your activity this morning is to choose one or
more of each of the sections (cards), and once you’ve
done that, to think of a way that you can draw them all
together to create a Greek myth story of your own...
You’re going to need to select a hero or some heroes,
the tools they might be given to help them, the
creatures or monsters they need to defeat, and which
god might help them to do it. Perhaps one of the gods
will be the person that gives them these things.
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The children started choosing and talking about
the characters on the cards. The teacher reminded
them to work as a team and agree together what
they were going to have and how they would string
their ideas together. After talking about their ideas,
the children decided to choose Athena, Cassandra,
Perseus, Hercules, and Typhon to create their own
Greek myth story.
Teacher:
So you’re now going to have some time to get out
the LEGO bricks and use the LEGO bricks to start
planning your story. You might want to use the LEGO
bricks to build the characters, and you need to think
about the settings...We’ve looked at things like
Greek temples, so what you need to do is to design
your ancient Greek setting... If there is any ideas you
want to jot down, you can do so, you also have the
LEGO bricks there to build with as much as you can.
During building
Asking children to explain their models
Reminding children of their story plans
Asking children to think how their models can help
with their writing
The children were highly engaged in building their
LEGO models, with lots of conversation going on.
They exchanged ideas of how they were going to build
their models, showed their models to each other, and
acted out in a playful way with the models they had
built. They used green pieces to build the Parthenon,
red and yellow pieces to build a cabin for Typhon, and
blue pieces to make a lake. After nishing building the
settings, they started making the characters.
Kate: Look, look, look. I’ve done Athena. Athena,
Athena (singing while one hand holding her model and
the other holding the card of Athena). It’s taller than
any other gods.
Harry: (humming and dancing with his model) Look at
this dragon!
Kate: (laughing) No, you don’t need a dragon!
Harry: Yeah, I do. He (Typhon) is a half dragon guy.
Kate: You need a dragons head.
Harry: I don’t really mind. I’m just going to make a
dragon anyway, because it will take hours to build the
actual guy.
Kate: True.
William: (holding his model) Guys, look, look, Perseus,
he is surng in the air.
After the children had built some models, the teacher
asked them to explain what they had made. He
reminded them to think about their story and how
they could use what they had built to represent the
problems that the characters would encounter. He
also asked them to think what they still needed to build
according to their plan and how their models were
going to help them write their story.
After nishing their models of characters, the
children started making weapons and tools for their
characters. One boy made a sword and used it to
pretend slaying a dragon.
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William: Look, look, Kate, I’ve got a sword (showing
his sword model) and then you can swap it around
whatever you’re happy.
Harry: It’s more of a stumped sword.
William: Where’s the dragon? I need to slay the dragon.
Dragon is right there! There is a seat!
Harry: I know. I know.
Harry passed the dragon model to William.
William: Put the seat on (he put a seat on the Pegasus
model). OK, guys, you need to get out for the game.
Harry: Let me give you the sword.
William: Heracles, where are you?
Kate:(passing a model to William) Here it is. That’s
Cassandra.
Kate started singing on her chair. William and Harry
joined the singing as well.
When the building time nished, the teacher asked the
children to pack away all the unused bits into the box,
leaving only the models they built, the cards, sheets,
pens and pencils on the table, before they had a break.
Transition from building to writing
Giving each child a chance to talk about their models
Asking children to discuss the opening, build-up,
problems, resolution, and ending of their story
Asking children to jot down their ideas and plans
After the break, the teacher asked each child to talk
about their models. The children explained that they
had made Typhon, Perceus and his sword, Athena,
Cassandra, Heracles, Pegasus and Parthenon.
The teacher then asked the children what happened in
the start of their story. The children decided that three
famous Greek heroes Cassandra, Heracles, and Perceus
visited Temple Parthenon in the opening of their story.
“Perceus comes into Temple Parthenon and wondering
what he can do. Then he sees Heracles and he has a chat
with him and asks him if he can do some training with
him. He nds a shining sword.Cassandra goes into the
Parthenon and sees them ghting.”
The teacher then asked the children what was going
to be the build-up that may lead to their problems.
The children decided that “a cabin is being set re and
burning down”, “and it defeats the evil”, “out of the
ashes of the re comes up a massive Typhon”.
The teacher then gave children some time to discuss
what problems may be caused and how the characters
were going to resolve the issues, and what happened in
the end. The children discussed and jotted down ideas
on their sheets.
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Kicking o writing
Providing children with useful vocabulary
Reminding children to use their models to help
with their writing
Teacher:
You’ve discussed very well. Now we need to start
writing. If you need any help with spelling, you’ve
got things like the character’s names, all written
down here (teacher passing cards to the children).
How you’re going to write your story is up to you,
but you’ve got your words there to help you write, to
spell some complex words.
The teacher told the children to use their best spelling
attempts, but not to worry too much about spelling
things perfectly. He also explained how to make use
their LEGO models to help with their writing.
Teacher:
Now you do have your LEGO models here, you are
allowed to make use of this. But try to remember that
this is here to try to help you to do your writing, not
to stop you from doing your writing. If you need to
change something as part of your story, to help you
think, that’s ne to do, but make sure after you move
it, we stop and get back on with our writing activity,
because that’s the main point of this now we’re
moving to the writing.
The teacher reminded the children that they could look
at their group plan while they were writing, and that
they could use one of the VCOP sheets to help them
think about their punctuation.
The children were highly engaged in their writing
for about 40 minutes. They sometimes discussed
their ideas of how the story would develop and read
what they’ve read to the rest of the group. They also
occasionally looked at their cards and LEGO models
before continuing with their writing.
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Going on a micro-adventure - descriptive recount
Main purpose of the activity: Write a descriptive
recount of a story. Children had been working
with a story about a journey of two characters
that had been “micro-sized” to the size of an ant,
and were going on a journey down a street, or
through a garden.
Building instruction: The teacher showed a
video that had been taken with a camera very
close to the ground in a garden, so that children
could imagine the world from the perspective of a
minute being. Children discussed in carpet time.
They were then asked to create the character’s
journey with the mixed set.
Writing instruction: Children were asked to
write a descriptive recount of this journey and
everything that the two characters could see, hear,
or smell.
Ideas for playful writing
Year 1 activity ideas
Creating a journey for a story character linked to The
Lighthouse Keeper’s Cat
Main purpose of the activity: children had read
the beginning of the story - The Lighthouse
Keeper’s Cat and got to a page where there was
a large map. There was a path going around the
page and the cat met lots of characters on the way
and did lots of things until he got to the village at
the end. The teacher set the children the challenge
of creating a journey that the cat could go on. It
could be similar to the one in the story or it could
be completely imaginative.
Building instruction: Children were given a
whiteboard in their groups and drew the journey
rst. They decided what was going to happen to
the cat, whether he was going to climb a mountain
or jump over a river or meet a cow and lots of
dierent things. Then they went back to their
tables and they had their whiteboard next to them
and they built the LEGO
®
representation of it.
Writing instruction: to use your model to act
out the journey the cat went on. Then write the
journey as a story.
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What happened next? – creating a dierent ending to
Humpty Dumpty
Main purpose of the activity: children had read
the story of Humpty Dumpty. They need to come
up with a dierent ending following the structure:
Who made Humpty fall of the wall? How did they
do it?
Building instruction: Children had to build the
recreation of what happened to Humpty.
Writing instruction: to write one sentence
describing who made Humpty fall and how.
Remember the use of capital letters, ‘nger
spaces,’ and punctuation.
Creating your own “Toy Story”- imaginative writing
Main purpose of the activity:To create a story
scene and characters and act out story with
dialogue before writing their own stories.
Building instruction: To build a scene from your
story with all the characters (children had already
planned their stories on a story board) and act out
your story. Children made backgrounds on card to
stand behind their LEGO models.
Writing instruction: Write your own toy story
using your story plan and LEGO model to help you.
Designing your own circus – imaginative writing
Main purpose of the activity: for children to use
imaginations to design own circus and write
about it.
Building instruction: decide as a group what
you would like to have in your circus (e.g. which
performers) and make it together using the
LEGO bricks.
Writing instruction: describe all the things and
people that you included in your own circus.
Explain what they look like and what is happening.
Hedingham Castle visit recount - non-ction writing
Main purpose of the activity: write about our visit
to Hedingham Castle the day before using time
connectives to sequence events.
Building instruction: after a discussion session
and looking at photos of our visit on the interactive
whiteboard, children were asked to choose 3
dierent activities from our castle visit to model
using the LEGO bricks and put them in the correct
order.
Writing instruction: write what happened on
our visit to the castles trying to put events in the
correct order and using time connectives, such as
rst, next, then, after that.
Australian Animals - producing an information page
Main purpose of the activity: produce an
information page about an Australian animal (as
part of topic work on Australia).
Building instruction: children work as a group to
choose one Australian animal and make a model of
it, and where it lives.
Writing instruction: write sentences about
your animal on an information page format and
illustrate it.
Producing London landmark leaets - linked to ‘Katie
in London’
Main purpose of the activity: build one of the
landmarks in the Katie in London story (St Paul’s
Cathedral, London Eye, Globe Theatre or Tower
of London) to support non-ction leaet writing
about the landmark.
Building instruction: children previously went on
a “Journey to London” (trip to federated classroom
that was set up as London Landmarks) and
explored the ‘Katie in London’ story. They were
then encouraged to use photo of a landmark to
support building it using LEGO bricks.
Writing instruction: write leaet with headings
–“what you will see there”, “what you can do
there”, and “other interesting information”.
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Setting a scene in outer space - descriptive writing
Main purpose of the activity: to use descriptive
language and range of sentence openers.
Building instruction: having listened to a part
of George’s Secret Key to the Universe (which
described outer space) build what outer space
looks like.
Writing instruction: to use range of descriptive
phrases (space adjectives, verbs and adverbs) to
set the scene for an outer space adventure.
Writing a poem - in the style of “10 Things found in a
wizard’s pocket
Main purpose of the activity: to use the
framework of the poem “10 Things found in a
wizard’s pocket” to write “10 things found in the
Paperbag Prince’s Pocket”. The Paperbag Prince is
a character from our key text.
Building instruction: think about the character
of the Paperbag Prince. Build something that you
would nd in his pocket that tells us something
about his character.
Writing instruction: to use the objects to write a
poem, in the style of the poem “10 Things found in
a wizard’s pocket”.
Year 3 activity ideas
Telling an alternative adventure story – linked to
“The Tunnel”
Main purpose of the activity: to write an
alternative adventure story of Jack when he goes
through the tunnel (from Anthony Browne’s “The
Tunnel”).
Building instruction: to make three scenes
showing: 1. Jack coming out of the tunnel; 2.What
he nds; 3. Jack being turned to stone.
Writing instruction: to write three paragraphs
telling Jack’s story based on the models.
Creating a hero for your own story
Main purpose of the activity: to create a hero for
children’s own story, describe the character and
write a story of it.
Building instruction: to build a hero for your story.
Think about any special skills (e.g. weapons) your
character might need.
Writing instruction: use the mini-gs to write
their story.
What happened next? – completing The Adventure of
the Time Travelling Cat
Main purpose of the activity: to complete the
rest of an adventure story that children already
read up to a certain point in the book.
Building instruction: to build models to show what
happened next and how the story nishes.
Writing instruction: to write the rest of the story,
using the model to help with descriptive details.
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Creating a habitat for a new creature - information
text writing
Main purpose of the activity: to create a new
creature and also create the habitat to go with it.
Building instruction: to build a new creature and
build its habitat, making sure they include all the
elements the creature will need to survive.
Writing instruction: to write an information
text about the creature and its habitat, using
headings etc.
Saving the park - persuasive letter writing
Main purpose of the activity: to write a letter to
a council persuading them to save and rebuild the
local park.
Building instruction: to build the scene where the
protesters are in front of the council explaining
what they want.
Writing instruction: to write a persuasive letter in
order to save Stanley Street Park.
How to make a mummy – instruction writing
Main purpose of the activity: to write a set of
instructions.
Building instruction: to use the LEGO to act out
embalming a dead Pharaoh. The children had to
pretend they were chief embalmers training new
apprentices.
Writing instruction: to write the instructions
for how to embalm a body, using the features of
instructional writing.
Finding of Tutankhamun’s Tomb - newspaper
report writing
Main purpose of the activity: to build the tomb
and the characters involved- Howard Carter,
Lord Carnarvon, Lady Evelyn and then write a
newspaper report – using newspaper features
and languages.
Building instruction: to build the tomb and
represent those present at the eld.
Writing instruction: to write a newspaper report
about the tomb nding.
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Creating a comic strip - mixing ICT and Art with
literacy lessons
Main purpose of the activity: to tell a story of
climbing into a painting and changing it – in comic
strip form. Children previously went to an art
gallery and picked a painting, within their groups,
that they wanted to recreate with the LEGO set.
Building instruction: each group were given a
camera and a LEGO minigure. They had to take
ve photos of their models, one for each scene
of the comic strip. They were also given the task
of changing an aspect of the paintings, as the
minigure was to break into the painting and
leave, or change, something to show that they
had been there.
Writing instruction: add text to your photographs
to tell the story. The writing section of this task
was spread over a length of time, and over the
progress of the task.
Recreating a bedroom – linked to “Through
the Keyhole”
Main purpose of the activity: to create and
describe the bedroom of a character from our
story using subtle descriptions (hints about whose
room it was).
Building instruction: to recreate the bedroom you
imagine the character to have.
Writing instruction: to write a description of the
bedroom without mentioning the characters
name.
Year 5 activity ideas
Writing a play script - modernising a Shakespeare
scene (Hamlet)
Main purpose of the activity: to decode an
original Shakespeare scene using LEGO bricks and
write it as a modern play script.
Building instruction: to create the scene and
read through it with each group member taking a
dierent part, speaking their lines and moving the
character (acting with it) appropriately.
Writing instruction: to rewrite the Shakespeare
scene in a modern style.
Writing a poem: “go tiptoe through the woods”
Main purpose of the activity: for children to plan
the scene of their poem, considering eective
imagery and appropriate vocabulary. The poem
that they were basing theirs upon has a specic
structure and pattern that they were asked to
follow.
Building instruction: to create your images
independently for 15 minutes. Share and listen to
ideas. Work together to build one group model.
Attach descriptive vocabulary to your model.
Writing instruction: to create your own poem
based upon the example and follow its structure.
Use the LEGO model to help you describe each
section.
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Creating freeze frames - alternative story
ending writing
Main purpose of the activity: to combine
children’s predictions and imaginations to create
an ending for an author’s chapter.
Building instruction: to create freeze-frames
using the LEGO bricks (they then did actual freeze
frames after as well).
Writing instruction: to write the ending of the
chapter, using paragraphs and connectives.
Retelling the story of Romeo and Juliet
Main purpose of the activity: to build two scenes
per group of three to add to the class storyboard-
telling the whole story as a class. Clues to who the
characters are must be present and body language
should be considered.
Building instruction: children had a synopsis of
the story, which they were already very familiar
with and their two sections were highlighted. They
were to build the two scenes providing clues to
characters and feelings so that they were easily
readable to others.
Writing instruction: to use synonyms to
introduce the story; use causal connectives to
retell the middle of the story; use the conditional
to explain the regrets of the characters at the
end. Each child had a storyboard of photos of all
of the scenes produced.
Representing a tense encounter – linked to ‘Theseus
and the Minotaur’
Main purpose of the activity: to create the scene
where Theseus encounters the Minotaur.
Building instruction: to create a crucial, detailed
scene when Theseus comes across the Minotaur.
Writing instruction: to describe in writing the
feelings of a character at a point of tension.
Creating a crime scene - police report writing
Main purpose of the activity: to create a crime
scene and then retell what had happened in the
format of a police report.
Building instruction: to create a crime scene
based on the book “Tuesday”.
Writing instruction: to write a police report
ensuring that it is written in the third person, with
quotes and direct speech, and that it is written
with evidence.
Ideas for playful writing
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Credits
This teacher handbook is written by
Researchers David Whitebread and Marisol Basilio at
the PEDAL Centre, Faculty of Education, University of
Cambridge, UK.
With valued contributions from
Teachers Kate Gutterridge, Lynne Morris, David
Hawkins, Jemma Calverley, Katie Fischer, Julie Hare,
Sonia Ingersent, Emily Barratt, and Carrie Rice.
Children from Years 1, 3 and 5 at Bar Hill Community
School, Fawcett Primary School, and St. Matthews
Primary School in Cambridge, UK.
PLaNS co-investigators Helen Bradford and Mary
Anne Wolpert, Faculty of Education, University of
Cambridge.
PLaNS Research team R. Heeds, H. Jensen, M. Kim, M.
Kuvalja, S. Nath, A. O’Connor, Z. Rao, G. Seymour, P.
Torres, L. Vuillier, and A. Zachariou
The resources, tips and activity ideas on pages 22-27
are adapted with permission from Pino-Pasternak,
D. (2010). The Children Articulating Thinking (ChAT)
Project Activity Handbook and Dawes, L. & Sams, C.
(2004). Talk Box: Speaking & Listening Activities at
Key Stage 1. London: David Fulton.
Follow this link to access the ChAT handbook:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bzu8VsCz0-
yaRjZrOU1YM3gzYzg
The pictures on pages 43 and 45 were taken at a
Playful Writing Day in October 2015 and feature with
permission from the University of Cambridge Primary
School.
Suggested citation
Whitebread, D. & Basilio, M. (2017). Playful Writing:
Building stories together to inspire young writers: a
teacher handbook. PEDAL: Centre for Research on
Play in Education, Development and Learning & the
LEGO Foundation.
About the authors
Dr. David Whitebread
David is a developmental psychologist and early years
specialist. Before joining the Faculty of Education, he
taught in primary schools for 12 years. His research
interests are concerned with childrens psychological
development and implications for quality in early
childhood and primary education. In particular, his
work has focused on young children’s playfulness,
their language development and the consequences
for early metacognition and self-regulation. His
latest book is Developmental Psychology and Early
Childhood Education (Sage, 2012).
Dr. Marisol Basilio
Marisol is a developmental and educational
psychologist. Her work is focused on cognitive
and social skills that enhance learning experiences
in childhood. Marisol is particularly interested
in supporting equitable learning opportunities
throughout the early years by understanding
how adults can encourage children to become
independent and playful learners. She is currently
a Research Fellow at the Faculty of Education,
University of Cambridge, supported by an ESRC
Future Research Leaders grant.
This Playful Writing handbook is published with
support from the LEGO Foundation
The handbook is published in 2016 and licensed under
a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-
ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License (http://
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Credits
The Faraway Tree
Inspired by Enid Blyton’s novel
‘The Enchanted Wood’ (1939)
About the PEDAL Centre
The PEDAL centre is located in the University of
Cambridge Faculty of Education, and was launched
in October 2015 with funding from the LEGO
Foundation. Our mission is to conduct academic
research into the role of play in young children’s
education, development and learning to inform wider
practice and policy.
About the LEGO Foundation
Founded in 1986, the LEGO Foundation is built on the
enduring values of the founding family behind the
LEGO Group. Our aim is to raise awareness of the role
of play for creativity, learning and development and to
build and share knowledge on how to engage children
in learning-rich play activities. We collaborate with
leading academic institutions to cultivate and spread
this knowledge, and we strive to equip and empower
children to build a better future for themselves and
their societies.
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